Finally, montage released.
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Finally, montage released.
http://m.youtube.com/index?desktop_uri=%2F&gl=US#/watch?v=U9nk08J-cNc
That's my montage check it out.
1. I'm getting a new YouTube channel, simply because I can't change that username. Unless it's going on the QE channel, then i won't bother.
2. One kill was repeated by accident.
3. Some of my kills are laggy, my captions tell u.
Opinions plz, and u guys think I coulda used better music? I still wanna edit it b4 it goes up on QE YouTube.
That's my montage check it out.
1. I'm getting a new YouTube channel, simply because I can't change that username. Unless it's going on the QE channel, then i won't bother.
2. One kill was repeated by accident.
3. Some of my kills are laggy, my captions tell u.
Opinions plz, and u guys think I coulda used better music? I still wanna edit it b4 it goes up on QE YouTube.
JawsMoney- QuarantineElite Member
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Re: Finally, montage released.
This is the link to the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U9nk08J-cNc&context=C3722d88ADOEgsToPDskKSFUW0hAmYuSGOY2kAPI5r
Ok so I think I found some things you can do a bit better in your montage, and since you seem to love long lists, here we go :
1. Don't use camp kills, any noob can get those, and they don't reflect quarantine skills at all.
2. You have a duplicate of a kill
3. Use better transitions. No one wants to see a page scroll 10 times in a row
4. Make sure all your kills are the VERY best you can get. No kills like 4:54, literally wwejames can get those kills consistently
5. Lose the little comments at the bottom of the screen. None of them are even mildly amusing. Oh and you misspelled lag in one of your comments.
6. No one wants to see you sit in an elevator. At 6:00 just cut to the kill and then speed it up until you get to the survival.
7. Faster music, something to get the people watching pumped up and exited for the next kill/run.
8. Lots of times the transitions actually blocked out the kill.
9. Better transitions for the first clips.
10. Don't make me turn my head, that's just stupid.
11. Make the color corrections better, that blue tinge gets annoying after a few clips.
12. Take that fail nade at 8:20 out, PLEASE.
13. That part where you got ksed, that too, out, thank you
14. Some clips were grey, some were blue, some purple, some green.. Stick to one.
15. Quarantine has been around for less than three years.. fix the shoutouts.
16. Take out that comment about the unbelievable, proof or spoof.
17. Upload to a file sharing website & send me the link so I can upload it to the channel
Ok so I think I found some things you can do a bit better in your montage, and since you seem to love long lists, here we go :
1. Don't use camp kills, any noob can get those, and they don't reflect quarantine skills at all.
2. You have a duplicate of a kill
3. Use better transitions. No one wants to see a page scroll 10 times in a row
4. Make sure all your kills are the VERY best you can get. No kills like 4:54, literally wwejames can get those kills consistently
5. Lose the little comments at the bottom of the screen. None of them are even mildly amusing. Oh and you misspelled lag in one of your comments.
6. No one wants to see you sit in an elevator. At 6:00 just cut to the kill and then speed it up until you get to the survival.
7. Faster music, something to get the people watching pumped up and exited for the next kill/run.
8. Lots of times the transitions actually blocked out the kill.
9. Better transitions for the first clips.
10. Don't make me turn my head, that's just stupid.
11. Make the color corrections better, that blue tinge gets annoying after a few clips.
12. Take that fail nade at 8:20 out, PLEASE.
13. That part where you got ksed, that too, out, thank you
14. Some clips were grey, some were blue, some purple, some green.. Stick to one.
15. Quarantine has been around for less than three years.. fix the shoutouts.
16. Take out that comment about the unbelievable, proof or spoof.
17. Upload to a file sharing website & send me the link so I can upload it to the channel
@ CamperTard- Guest
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Re: Finally, montage released.
Glad I got some heavy feedback. I won't let u down tard
JawsMoney- QuarantineElite Member
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Re: Finally, montage released.
Shit man you hit him hard here lolCamperTard wrote:This is the link to the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U9nk08J-cNc&context=C3722d88ADOEgsToPDskKSFUW0hAmYuSGOY2kAPI5r
Ok so I think I found some things you can do a bit better in your montage, and since you seem to love long lists, here we go :
1. Don't use camp kills, any noob can get those, and they don't reflect quarantine skills at all.
2. You have a duplicate of a kill
3. Use better transitions. No one wants to see a page scroll 10 times in a row
4. Make sure all your kills are the VERY best you can get. No kills like 4:54, literally wwejames can get those kills consistently
5. Lose the little comments at the bottom of the screen. None of them are even mildly amusing. Oh and you misspelled lag in one of your comments.
6. No one wants to see you sit in an elevator. At 6:00 just cut to the kill and then speed it up until you get to the survival.
7. Faster music, something to get the people watching pumped up and exited for the next kill/run.
8. Lots of times the transitions actually blocked out the kill.
9. Better transitions for the first clips.
10. Don't make me turn my head, that's just stupid.
11. Make the color corrections better, that blue tinge gets annoying after a few clips.
12. Take that fail nade at 8:20 out, PLEASE.
13. That part where you got ksed, that too, out, thank you
14. Some clips were grey, some were blue, some purple, some green.. Stick to one.
15. Quarantine has been around for less than three years.. fix the shoutouts.
16. Take out that comment about the unbelievable, proof or spoof.
17. Upload to a file sharing website & send me the link so I can upload it to the channel
Re: Finally, montage released.
CamperTard wrote:1. Don't use camp kills, any noob can get those, and they don't reflect quarantine skills at all.
2. You have a duplicate of a kill
3. Use better transitions. No one wants to see a page scroll 10 times in a row
4. Make sure all your kills are the VERY best you can get. No kills like 4:54, literally wwejames can get those kills consistently
5. Lose the little comments at the bottom of the screen. None of them are even mildly amusing. Oh and you misspelled lag in one of your comments.
6. No one wants to see you sit in an elevator. At 6:00 just cut to the kill and then speed it up until you get to the survival.
7. Faster music, something to get the people watching pumped up and exited for the next kill/run.
8. Lots of times the transitions actually blocked out the kill.
9. Better transitions for the first clips.
10. Don't make me turn my head, that's just stupid.
11. Make the color corrections better, that blue tinge gets annoying after a few clips.
12. Take that fail nade at 8:20 out, PLEASE.
13. That part where you got ksed, that too, out, thank you
14. Some clips were grey, some were blue, some purple, some green.. Stick to one.
15. Quarantine has been around for less than three years.. fix the shoutouts.
16. Take out that comment about the unbelievable, proof or spoof.
17. Upload to a file sharing website & send me the link so I can upload it to the channel
Lmao. Basically my feedback.
I wouldn't call it a "minitage" when its ten minutes long.
Good luck on your next one.
Equilibirum- QuarantineElite Member
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Re: Finally, montage released.
running was sloppy
Hayden- Guest
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Re: Finally, montage released.
LOL You people are harsh.
RoNiN- QuarantineElite Administrator
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Re: Finally, montage released.
Things to Work on.
1. That kill repeated, was right next to each other and you didn't even see Infected Destroyed.
2. Tilt your head, not in the mood. Rather watch it upside down, but good try.
3. Don't mention when your having lag and stuff, just takes the emphasis off it. (Whoa that guy killed a zombie and he has lag, dang.)
4.Colors get annoying, so do it for 1 slide.
5. Heard a guy on a mic saying yah twice at about 2:12-2:16. Try to make your game sound completely and music as the only thing. If you used Windows Movie Maker Live, go to the Project tab, and go to Audio Mix to possibly fix that.
6.KS Kill, not really needed in that.
7. Don't record that you failed, shows your not as good.
8. By the way, most of your clips appeared to be recorded in Foxtrot. Try some other servers .
9. Few Clips are cut so you cant see the kill.
10. Sometimes captions are okay, but when you get to much it slows it down. (example: poor spec)
11. Camping in the vault was quite slow at that part and didn't really see much action.
12. When doing these, add a good rock song or something to get it going.
13. Make shout outs quick you know, 2 minute shout-outs sometime get boring, and people just leave early and don't give a crap. (me).
Good Things:
1. I find many of your clips to be very good. So good, i find them to be better than some of Stiff's.
2. The lag shows you can adapt after it and keep going. (fix when you say I'm gonna lag, getting rid of it brings my attention when i see it.)
3. HD quality was excellent.
4. Few made me laugh, because they ended up in the wrong place and didn't touch crap. , but its good to have some comedy in montages. Maybe most people would say different, but that's me.
5. His running wasn't sloppy LOL, but to me i don't understand the spamming of right click while running with a tracker. To many times gets on my nerves, but that's me so this one you don't have to listen to cause i don't think you will want to record again just for one person.
As long as you get the top things you should have the major kinks taken out.
Otherwise good luck and i wish you luck on your montage for the future .
1. That kill repeated, was right next to each other and you didn't even see Infected Destroyed.
2. Tilt your head, not in the mood. Rather watch it upside down, but good try.
3. Don't mention when your having lag and stuff, just takes the emphasis off it. (Whoa that guy killed a zombie and he has lag, dang.)
4.Colors get annoying, so do it for 1 slide.
5. Heard a guy on a mic saying yah twice at about 2:12-2:16. Try to make your game sound completely and music as the only thing. If you used Windows Movie Maker Live, go to the Project tab, and go to Audio Mix to possibly fix that.
6.KS Kill, not really needed in that.
7. Don't record that you failed, shows your not as good.
8. By the way, most of your clips appeared to be recorded in Foxtrot. Try some other servers .
9. Few Clips are cut so you cant see the kill.
10. Sometimes captions are okay, but when you get to much it slows it down. (example: poor spec)
11. Camping in the vault was quite slow at that part and didn't really see much action.
12. When doing these, add a good rock song or something to get it going.
13. Make shout outs quick you know, 2 minute shout-outs sometime get boring, and people just leave early and don't give a crap. (me).
Good Things:
1. I find many of your clips to be very good. So good, i find them to be better than some of Stiff's.
2. The lag shows you can adapt after it and keep going. (fix when you say I'm gonna lag, getting rid of it brings my attention when i see it.)
3. HD quality was excellent.
4. Few made me laugh, because they ended up in the wrong place and didn't touch crap. , but its good to have some comedy in montages. Maybe most people would say different, but that's me.
5. His running wasn't sloppy LOL, but to me i don't understand the spamming of right click while running with a tracker. To many times gets on my nerves, but that's me so this one you don't have to listen to cause i don't think you will want to record again just for one person.
As long as you get the top things you should have the major kinks taken out.
Otherwise good luck and i wish you luck on your montage for the future .
Re: Finally, montage released.
Spamming of the right click shows dominance towards a zombie .. and its a tease. When I throw my knife at u it means "come @ me bro" and if im still doing it .. u should be mad ... cause im still alive and not dead yet, why? cause u didnt infect me. Besides ... on killcam it looks much cooler .. but thats just me.
JawsMoney- QuarantineElite Member
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Re: Finally, montage released.
I just do it because the right click looks cooler than the left click and I have to have something to do while I run
@ CamperTard- Guest
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Re: Finally, montage released.
CamperTard wrote:I just do it because the right click looks cooler than the left click and I have to have something to do while I run
Hayden- Guest
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Re: Finally, montage released.
If your talking about a tease, I have the patience where i wont even follow you. All the people come back or i just walk over and try again if it don't work after 5 hits, wait another 20 seconds, Normally people make it predictable especially if they do the same thing a lot. Easier work for me. For super free runners like Stiff, control my shots.
Re: Finally, montage released.
First thing, don't make it freaking 10 minutes long. Second, lol @ 4:25. Also don't show long clips of yourself camping and waiting becuase its just boring to watch. Shoutouts were too long imo. I'd also like to add that I liked your choice of music for this montage.
Taeyeon- QuarantineElite Administrator
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Re: Finally, montage released.
I liked it, at some points I didn't but I honestly can't criticize anyone with my 1GB computer. Also, the music we got the same taste. ^_^, overall it was good just try to not edit it so much and take out the shoutouts and basically everything Camper said.
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CamperTard wrote:This is the link to the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U9nk08J-cNc&context=C3722d88ADOEgsToPDskKSFUW0hAmYuSGOY2kAPI5r
Ok so I think I found some things you can do a bit better in your montage, and since you seem to love long lists, here we go :
1. Don't use camp kills, any noob can get those, and they don't reflect quarantine skills at all.
2. You have a duplicate of a kill
3. Use better transitions. No one wants to see a page scroll 10 times in a row
4. Make sure all your kills are the VERY best you can get. No kills like 4:54, literally wwejames can get those kills consistently
5. Lose the little comments at the bottom of the screen. None of them are even mildly amusing. Oh and you misspelled lag in one of your comments.
6. No one wants to see you sit in an elevator. At 6:00 just cut to the kill and then speed it up until you get to the survival.
7. Faster music, something to get the people watching pumped up and exited for the next kill/run.
8. Lots of times the transitions actually blocked out the kill.
9. Better transitions for the first clips.
10. Don't make me turn my head, that's just stupid.
11. Make the color corrections better, that blue tinge gets annoying after a few clips.
12. Take that fail nade at 8:20 out, PLEASE.
13. That part where you got ksed, that too, out, thank you
14. Some clips were grey, some were blue, some purple, some green.. Stick to one.
15. Quarantine has been around for less than three years.. fix the shoutouts.
16. Take out that comment about the unbelievable, proof or spoof.
17. Upload to a file sharing website & send me the link so I can upload it to the channel
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